Splegg Toxin

Discussion in 'Map Submission' started by lkyjgxd, Mar 2, 2018.

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Would you like to see this map inside Splegg?

  1. Yes!!

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  2. No, with a few tweaks!

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  1. lkyjgxd

    lkyjgxd Talk of the Town

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    A Hive Splegg Map
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    ~Toxin~
    Built By
    lkyjgxd & qqqqqqqppppppp

    Hey Bees! (bee)
    Today, qqqqqqqppppppp and I have built a new map for Splegg called Toxin! It consists of 3 flat layers with large space to fight on, which is what most Spleggers like these days! :p
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    So, the first screenshot of this unique map is from above. And the players spawn on the 4 bottles full of deadly poison. There are 5 pink stained glass blocks on each bottle, and they spawn on those:


    above.png
    The first layer is a ring and 4 bottles of poison. This gives players more options to fight on and makes the map look unique!
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    The second layer is a nice, flat layer. It again, is surrounded by little bottles of toxin. However, there is a BIG bottle of toxin in the middle, packed full of TNT! Watch out before going near this:
    middle.png

    Last but
    certainly not least, we have the third layer. This layer is significantly larger than the top two layers, giving players more space to fight. Notice the ring around the outside is one block lower, this is to make the map's form look different to some of the maps we have now:
    bottom.png
    Here is a side view of the map to give you a better look at the form: (The rings around it are just for decoration :p)
    side2.png

    So, thank you for your time, and we hope this map gets accepted! ;)
    Screenshots were taken by qqqqqqqppppppp :) (@Zebruh)
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  2. CatInTuxedo16

    CatInTuxedo16 Honey Maker Ultimate Member

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    This Looks amazing! I am trying to find criticism but it is hard, because this map looks great and in terms of game play, very good! My one concern is the name doesn't really fit, and if you're gonna call it venom add some spiders or snakes. Good luck!!! This has potention <3
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  3. Avanna

    Avanna Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    I think this map looks amazing! I love the potions you've added into the design. Good job and good luck
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  4. lkyjgxd

    lkyjgxd Talk of the Town

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    Thanks for the reply! And yes, maybe we will think of a different name for the future! :)

    Thanks!! ;)
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  5. Shaxd

    Shaxd Famous Gold Member

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    Kay in general this can be seen as a well done map which is better than some current maps. The theme fits the map and it is built quite unique (I liek the potions) . Now my critism is "rather" minor. The 3 layers look pretty similiar to each other (shape, patern) with a few changes mostly in width. Also your last layer isnt perfect to playwise. As it is rly small and will be basically non existent at the end of every game which makes the map uncompetetive concering tournaments and cws (teamfights and intense 1v1s just arent possible). Ye thats basically it I mean I dont see the function of the white circles as well but thats not rly that important x_X
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  6. lkyjgxd

    lkyjgxd Talk of the Town

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    Thanks for your reply, Shaxd! We weren't really concerned about CWS and whatever, but we can always edit this and make it bigger if need be. The rings are just there for decoration - to make the map look complete. Intense 1v1s can be possible due to the fact that the last layer is around 10-11 blocks thick, and the potions are there for extra space - if not broken before. Thanks though :)
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  8. lkyjgxd

    lkyjgxd Talk of the Town

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    Hey! thanks for your reply. We can always add some sort of lighting in, but it needs to fit the theme. We will try our best to fit your expectations - always. :)
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    lkyjgxd Talk of the Town

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    R4nddy Talk of the Town Emerald Member

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  13. lkyjgxd

    lkyjgxd Talk of the Town

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    At least give me some form of feedback and don’t just vote no ;)
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  14. Mistylock

    Mistylock The Bees Knees

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    Really like the potions and overall theme.
    However, I have to agree with @Shaxd. Also, I'm not exactly sure how I feel about the clay colors together.

    -- Hope to see this get added soon! :D
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  15. Gideeon

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    Well all I can say that this is perfect, man. I can’t even spot a minuscule mistake at all, I think this map is on point and should get inboxed! The design of the whole map looks very classy and modern to me, it kinda resembles a yoyo.
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  16. Mr3lueSky

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    Another unique splegg map I like it! :)
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  17. lkyjgxd

    lkyjgxd Talk of the Town

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    Thanks! Shaxd's message was before this updated version, but always nice to have good feedback :)

    Wow, thanks a lot! :D make sure to tag b0xx3r :3

    Thanks! :)
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  18. lkyjgxd

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    This is lookin' fancy cx the revamp is much better!
    @b0xx3r !
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  20. lkyjgxd

    lkyjgxd Talk of the Town

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    Thankyou! c:
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