Splegg SugarRush - Splegg Map by Frapcarino

Discussion in 'Map Submission' started by frappuccinoooooo, Aug 6, 2020.

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Would you like to see this map on HiveMC?

  1. Yes!

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  2. Yes, with changes. (comment what I should change)

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  3. No! (Comment why)

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  1. frappuccinoooooo

    frappuccinoooooo Honey Maker Ultimate Member

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    *ahem*
    Okay, here I go.
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    Hello! I'm Frapcarino!
    Today I have something special to present, a Splegg map
    that I have been working on!

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    It's called SugarRush!
    It consists of top layers of
    Pop-tarts and Mini-Waffles, a middle layer of
    a GINORMOUS pancake, and a bottom layer of a doughnut and plate!

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    I have an imgur album of the map, consisting of both
    Shader screenshots, and Vanilla screenshots.

    (OUTDATED)
    Click Me for the link to OLD Imgur Album!
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    Click Here for link to NEW Imgur Album!
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    I Also have a YouTube Flyover video (with a resource pack) ShadowPack v3
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    Click Me for the link to the YouTube map flyover! (OLD)

    CLICK ME FOR NEW FLYOVER!

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    CHANGELOG:

    Replaced the "Syrup Bottle" with a fork and knife.
    Re-Colored the Waffles on top layer
    Made the slice in pancake a 90 degree angle
    Raised TNT on Pancake and put glass around it
    Added an extra layer on bottom
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    That's all, folks! Feedback is very much appreciated!
    Hope you enjoy!

    -Frapcarino



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  2. AlMightyDeusVult

    AlMightyDeusVult Talk of the Town Emerald Member

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    1.
    I'd suggest either making the map larger or adding 1-2 more layers as it seems quite small for a splegg map, and with the amount of TNT there is as well I'd imagine a lot of the blocks will be gone really quickly. And having the top layer be as small as it is, is probably not a great thing either

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    The layers also seem to consists of 2 layers themself which is probably something you want to change as well (the quartz around the corners might just be for a bit of depth, but it's difficult to see if the layer is 2 blocks thick or if it's just 1 block around the corner that's made to give depth.

    Visually the map looks pretty good, so well done on that!
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  3. frappuccinoooooo

    frappuccinoooooo Honey Maker Ultimate Member

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    Thanks for feedback! The quarts outline on all of the layers are just on the edges, not two layers. But in the center of the pancake on the butter, another layer of pancake is there. I could remove the extra layer below the butter. I will make the changes. Thanks!
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  4. AlMightyDeusVult

    AlMightyDeusVult Talk of the Town Emerald Member

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    The middle of the pancake with the butter should be fine, but having a full map where it's 2 blocks thick isn't recommended (if I'm not wrong)
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  5. kingsarechamps

    kingsarechamps Famous

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    As Deus said, it looks incredibly small. I would add 2-4 more layers underneath the first one, as well as changing the layers so it’s not two thick. It will not get accepted if the layer is more than one block thick, as it’s not playable. I would recommend maybe adding four islands on top of the pancake where players spawn, then the pancake layer, then a plate that is 6-9 blocks below that, and maybe a “table” after that. It’s just really lacking that splegg type feel
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  6. frappuccinoooooo

    frappuccinoooooo Honey Maker Ultimate Member

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    Good idea! I will try to put these into consideration!
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