Death Run Olympus

Discussion in 'Map Submission' started by MiaRqse, May 21, 2018.

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Should this map be added?

  1. Yes, I love the map.

    28 vote(s)
    90.3%
  2. No, I think it could use some work. (Please comment below)

    2 vote(s)
    6.5%
  3. No, I don't think it should be added. (Please tell us why)

    1 vote(s)
    3.2%
  1. Mwia

    Mwia Famous Ultimate Member

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    Olympus by Team DRD
    & friends

    Map Information


    Average time: 2:05

    Checkpoints: 9

    Death traps: 29 traps

    Build time: 2-3 weeks approx

    Shaders: https://imgur.com/a/USGbeUy

    Non-shaders: https://imgur.com/a/53OEjEU

    Runner Lane:


    Death Lane:


    Start (Stage 1)
    Fire Snake 1
    Netherrack Ignite
    Invisible Bridge

    Stage 2
    Fire Arrows 1
    Air Snake 1
    Disappearing Blocks 1
    Double Fire Snake
    JUMP BOOST*

    Stage 3
    TNT Push
    Water Flood 1
    Cobwebs*

    Stage 4
    Minefield 1
    Water Snake
    Disappearing Blocks 2

    Stage 5
    Water Flood 2 Millon
    JUMP BOOST Stairs*
    Water Stream*

    Stage 6
    Carpet Ignite
    Melting Ice (Stupid Global Warming smh)
    Faulty Slabs

    Stage 7
    Minefield 2
    Piston Launch
    Mini Giant Spawn
    Collapsing Ladders

    Stage 8
    Fire Arrows 2
    Air Snake 2
    Water Stream*
    Disappearing Blocks 3
    Cobweb Barriers*
    Wall Block
    Minefield 3

    Stage 9
    Vanishing Slime
    Unstable Wooden Floor
    Disappearing Blocks 4
    Fire Arrows 5
    JUMP BOOST*
    Final Parkour*
    Finish

    Project leader, Wall builder and hell enthusiast: @MiaRqse
    Trap (Builder), Sign Writer and Tree Enthusiast: @JustKiwi
    Builder and detailer: @Vqrgenx
    Original Build Idea and Resident Parkourist, also helped build a bit: @SleepyPqnda
    Terri former and Fish Boy: @Sxmi
    Detailer, local map tester and adviser: @8BitHero

    Helpers: @Spintown, @Timmetatsch & @turtlelord66

    Testers: @RoadEnthusiast, @Enaki, @LxndyNgvy3n, @peyman, @nik9094, @xGeorge

    Please feel free to message me if you want to test the map!
    Also any Feedback would be greatly appreciated!

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    Last edited: May 21, 2018
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  2. JustKiwi

    JustKiwi Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    First! also was fun working on this map c:
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  3. Marleeey

    Marleeey The Bees Knees Ultimate Member

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    oOoOoooo, nice map! Love the pictures too. Good luck on getting accepted!
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  4. _reph_

    _reph_ V.I.BEE Emerald Member

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    cool map, p excited
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  5. Hwamz

    Hwamz V.I.BEE Ultimate Member

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    Nice map I feel like alot of people will get confused with it. But nice map.
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  6. ItsJustEnder

    ItsJustEnder Talk of the Town

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    I have to agree with @Hwamz as some parts look a bit confusing. The one that looks most confusing to me is the final jump boost as it would be hard for players to know to jump down to there or jump all the way to the final parkour (even if there are arrows xD). Although I think the rest of the map is great! You all decorated it beautifully! Hope it gets accepted! :D
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  7. Magiiiix

    Magiiiix Famous Ultimate Member

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    The map is very nice! c: Good luck! ^-^
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  8. epp

    epp The Bees Knees Ultimate Member

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    epproved!

    good luck!
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  9. Alciras

    Alciras Famous Ultimate Member

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    Had a great time testing this map!
    Really hope it gets accepted c;

    also tbh it looks like elements mixed with skylands
    and many many people will get confused with the jump. it's way too high and people will not know where to land because it is an outlier compared to other jump boosts from other maps. especially people who have high fov, like the recorder of the map, had the screen rotated because of the high jump, so, if possible, i would try removing the jump boost and trying something else if you can (or of course, make the jump boost less high)
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  10. nik9094

    nik9094 The Bees Knees Emerald Member

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    Good videos, is good especially the fps kappa

    Love this map, glad I helped by doing nothing at all!

    Probs one of my favourite except difficulty which @SleepyPqnda COULD'VE DONE MORE ABOUT COOOUGH
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  11. NicoNatsuhi

    NicoNatsuhi Talk of the Town

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    The map looks really nice, I hope it gets accepted c:
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  12. Linako

    Linako Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    Oi! this is definitely a great looking map! The whole map looks amazing, all nature, the underground and every part are all very well build! Really hoping this map gets accepted <3 Well done!

    The thing I would make a little different is that there are some flat 1 block textures (or similar) in some parts of the track which you may get easily tired of, for example all the nether bricks or the netherrack part, maybe adding some red wool/stained clay instead of all the netherrack? Or, perhaps not? I know nothing about building so don't listen to me ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

    In anyway, i would definitely play this map!
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  13. DankMemeHannah

    DankMemeHannah Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    This map is awesome! i really hope i can play it soon!
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  14. ulyk

    ulyk Famous Emerald Member

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    Hey! I noticed the the beginning of the map is very nice and I think this map has potential. However I think that as a builder I could point you on some things to work on to make your map better ;D.

    1. Structures on top can improve: I noticed that on your structures and buildings leading up to the portal are very basic in shape and even blocks, I think that you should spend a good amount of time planning out very good buildings to put in your map, I would suggest putting in more around the grass area.

    2. If this is supposed to be Olympus then where is the magic and powers? I noticed that your map compared to the actual Mount Olympus told in Greek Myths is not really all that Myth like. That is ok if you are going for more of a realistic approach to the map however, I would suggest adding things to your map like giant flowers maybe or things inspired by Greek Myths to make your map all that much better to look at and explore.

    3. Your trees for sure need work! Many times it's hard to make a good tree for a map because they take so long and they might be really boring. However, spending more time on your trees can give you some very good results. I noticed that your trees in the run are fairly blocky (there is no air or space between leaves, or very little) I would suggest making bigger trees with a variety of leaves, bigger trunks with more branches, and leave bushes with more air or space in between them. This will allow your map for some very nice aesthetic on the outside.

    I really hope this helps and good luck with getting your map accepted! -Ulyk
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  15. Peetzah

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    want it
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  16. phlei

    phlei The Bees Knees Ultimate Member

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    I see a lot of potential in this map, but I feel like more can be done with it, such as that outside section with all the slabs/stairs. Also please fix that final jump boost smh. Make the emerald blocks higher up and make sure there it’s clear where you’re supposed to go. It’s also a little long in my opinion, but other than that and the other things, I really like it.

    Good luck!!1!1!11!1!!

    Idk why I made this so cancerous to look at
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