BedWars "Fairytale" New map 12 islands

Discussion in 'Map Submission' started by CheesierPasta, Jul 23, 2017.

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  1. CheesierPasta

    CheesierPasta Famous

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    Fairytale
    A Bedwars map for solo

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    Information
    The map you can see above and in the next few images is based on
    a fairytale world with oversized bugs such as these ladybirds,
    for Bedwars SOLO


    During the construction of this build, I had help from ArkayLP who is
    also on the same *BT as me. This build took a day of hard work.

    The ladybirds have diamond generators on and the central island has
    four emerald generators on it. 'The Enchanter' has a house and 'The Specialist' has a
    hoard of emeralds.
    Builders
    https://twitter.com/CheesierPasta @CheesierPasta
    https://twitter.com/ArkayLP

    Screenshots
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    Updates
    I have made the bottom of the small and the big island spiked.
    Also, the main island is flatter (Easier to fight) and looks better.
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    The Album
    http://imgur.com/a/L4uvI

    Built
    This was built on the AvaniumBuilds server, the twitter link for said team is: https://twitter.com/AvaniumBuilds

    Thank you for checking out the map.
    I'd greatly appreciate any feedback /constructive criticism.
    -CheesierPasta


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  2. VintageBrooklyn

    VintageBrooklyn Famous

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    I approve!
    (But.. I honestly think it'll look better (Minus the BedWars features) in SkyWars.. just my opinion.)
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  3. Toccata

    Toccata V.I.BEE

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    Wooow, this is such a pretty map. The central tree in particular is such an imposing sight - it looks incredible!

    As you've asked for feedback, I have a few comments for you:

    Firstly, while the huge tree does look awesome, it seems like it could potentially harbour lots of camping. I'm not quite sure how you could remedy this, but just thought I'd bring your attention to (or potentially remind you of) it.

    Secondly, I feel like the undersides of the islands could do with some work. The bowl shape doesn't seem too natural. This is just my opinion, but I'd say that a more pointy bottom (as if torn from the ground) would look better. Team Nectar's 'Ethereal' is a nice example of this - you can find some screenshots of it in my thread HERE.

    Thirdly, I'm not personally a fan of the woollen bridges stemming from the spawning islands. I like the idea that the islands have details in the team's colour, but it may be worth investigating other ways to do this.

    That said, I do really like this map. I really hope that I didn't seem over-critical here - it was just an effort to help you make the map as awesome as it can be.

    Best of luck for your submission! :)
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  4. CheesierPasta

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    I'll work on this as soon as I get some more time, maybe changing the colour of the leaves on the trees to the team colours could be good, but I'm not sure. Will try out.
    Update: I'm going to be leaving the bridges as they are since it is difficult to get the colour in any other way. I've also finished making the bottom of the islands better as you suggested.
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  5. MCFamerzism

    MCFamerzism The Bees Knees VIP

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    Wow this is adorable!

    The ladybirds are so well done, and the middle tree is very fairytale-ish.

    +1 from me!
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  6. Rafsk

    Rafsk Famous Ultimate Member

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    Wow. Nice building , but please do the version for Teams !
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  7. ILyraI

    ILyraI Famous Emerald Member

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    the trees and ladybugs are fabulous!! c:

    but you should probably redo the islands though, because pvping is gonna be very hard on the islands as there is no flat terrain
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  8. CheesierPasta

    CheesierPasta Famous

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    Just finished that, thank you for the suggestion!
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  9. TullyMastully

    TullyMastully The Bees Knees Ultimate Member

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    Amazing! Hopefully, it gets accepted.
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  10. Avanna

    Avanna Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    This is awesome! This needs to be in bedwars.
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  11. Josayy

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    it looks so nice :eek: I love it!
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  12. b0xx3r

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    In-b0x-Ed!

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  13. Gladje

    Gladje Well Known Bee Emerald Member

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    Great job! This map is lovely. Looking forward to it accepted, and if it's not, keep trying! You're a great builder.
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