TIMV Domos Placidas

Discussion in 'Map Submission' started by Marius1506, May 6, 2017.

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What do you think about this Map?

  1. It's great!

  2. It's nice, but it needs some improvements.

  3. It's bad.

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  1. Marius1506

    Marius1506 Honey Maker

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    Domos Placidas
    a "Trouble in Mineville" map built by marius1506
    and rainbowwormy with the help of MrFlume

    Map Information:
    • 130 chests
    • 4 enderchests
    • 9 accessible buildings
    • All trapped chests are double chests
    • Button in the tester building that traitors can use to close the entrance for 15 seconds and kill all people currently testing
    • There is a door in the tester building that traitors can use to escape the building
    • Every pathway is 2-3 blocks wide so traitors can't camp with claymores



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    I am open to different opinions and criticism, and we voice
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  2. Wormy

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    Hoping people like the map! :D
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  3. UltimateMilkDud

    UltimateMilkDud The Bees Knees Emerald Member

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    It's not bad, it has a lot of potential. I think you need more block variation on the buildings, as they have the same oak and stone concept. Other than that, the map is decent.
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  4. Wormy

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    There's wool on some of the buildings too - and that's how medieval buildings looked, just mostly stone and wood :)
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  5. Essej2

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    Firstly, the terrain is suspiciously square, you can shape it more. Furthermore it looks quite unrealistic, you should try to create more of a flow in the terrain.

    Your buildings look very weird, the theme is supposed to be medieval, but the blocks don't complement each other very well. The roofs are also very uninteresting, you can shape them a lot more, and use some different blocks. Usually roofs are wooden with a stonebrick border.

    You can also work on the shape and structure of your houses. The church for example looks really basic.

    I think my biggest concerns are your block choices (very dark and not pleasing to look at) and the lack of strong theme. Sure it's medieval but everybody has done that already.
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  6. Wormy

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    Thanks for the criticism - we know that a medieval map is a bit old idea, but we still wanted to do it :) We will try to improve the houses and the terrain!
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  7. uhhGee

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    I think this is an amazing map and I would definitely vote for it if I was added.
    One thing I'm not a fan of though is those Birch trees, I just think some of them look a little weird or maybe it's because you're using the fancy setting and I'm not used to seeing it. I don't know though, just a little weird looking..

    Good luck anyway.
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  8. Adaleon

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    Seems to be a nice map! For myself I can see that you wanted to make the best out of your idea.

    I would vote for it.
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  9. Marius1506

    Marius1506 Honey Maker

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    Thank you very much. I can understand you with the trees but I think it is up to everybodys personal opinion :).

    Thank you very much<3
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  10. aphellia

    aphellia Well Known Bee Emerald Member

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    looks good marius :)
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  11. Marius1506

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    Thank you so much :)
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  12. Poison_X

    Poison_X Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    woooooooooohoooo It's a great map I'm so excited to see it in TIMV, Good job @Marius1506
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  13. Marius1506

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    thx :)
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  14. Mistylock

    Mistylock The Bees Knees

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    I like it c: I do agree with @kwirky though.
    I keeping reading the map name as Dominos pizza lol
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  15. kwirky

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    I agree with the agreement by @Mistylock of me even though I hadn't posted anything before this xDD
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  16. Mistylock

    Mistylock The Bees Knees

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    lol! I meant @Essej2
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  17. b0xx3r

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    In-b0x-Ed!

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  18. Rafsk

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    Well well well summer hype incoming
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  19. Marius1506

    Marius1506 Honey Maker

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    Thank you
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  20. PolarFridge

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    Looks aesthetically perfect however as i've mentioned with previous content creators, I feel that it's just way to big.
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