Death Run +==Arcane Forest==+

Discussion in 'Map Submission' started by JustKiwi, Sep 4, 2018.

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Should this map be added?

  1. Yes!

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  2. Maybe with these changes! (Comment reasoning!)

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  3. No I don't! (Comment reasoning!)

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  1. JustKiwi

    JustKiwi Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    Arcane Forest
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    by JustKiwi

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    Map
    Information:

    Average Time: 1:26
    Number of Checkpoints: 8
    Number of Traps: 25
    Build Time: About 1 month actively (Some time before)
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    Screenshots and Videos
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    Runner Video


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    Death Video


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    Shaders

    https://imgur.com/a/ZivkgP0
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    Non-Shaders

    https://imgur.com/a/0bWSgOY

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    Traps (Non-Shaders)
    https://imgur.com/a/tjIgst5
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    Trap List
    Spawn (Pink Tree Plaza)

    Air Snake
    Dissapearing Parkour
    Overgrown Area*
    Minefield

    Over the Bridge

    Fire Carpets and Slabs
    Invisible Bridge
    Fire Snake

    Blue Tree Lane

    Weak Trapdoors
    Air Snake
    Falling Leaves

    Orange Corner

    Water Flood
    Water Flood
    Instant Oven
    Dissapearing Parkour
    Fence Obsticle*

    Yellow Trees Ahoy!

    Dissapearing Parkour
    Air Snake
    Pistons

    Into the Cave!

    Fire Snake
    Water Wall
    Electric Floor

    Cave Explorer

    Air Snake
    Dissapearing Parkour
    JUMP BOOST*

    Up and Dooooown

    Shuffle Parkour
    Stair Fall
    Fire Arrows
    Water Flood
    Leap of Faith*

    End

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    Credits
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    This was basically a solo map but I had help from these lovely people.
    @Timmetatsch : Helped overall with things
    @kwirky : Taught me to make better trees (Thanks : D)
    @Sxmi : Helped re-do the terraforming a bit and some other bits
    @SleepyPqnda : For recording the videos
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    Finally the map testers
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    @Willicm @NTMNathan @ArcyBol @peyman @ItsJustEnder @MiaRqse @fakekai @SkyFallen @KaZPro @phlei @Find and a couple more without forums accounts
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    Last Things
    What is Parkour Shuffle?

    Parkour Shuffle is a new unique trap where the parkour changes positions randomly this new pattern stays until the trap is activated again forming a new pattern. I'm not sure how codable this is but I thought I'd keep it.
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    Please feel free to message me if you want to test the map!
    Also any Feedback would be greatly appreciated!

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  2. ArcyBol

    ArcyBol Well Known Bee Ultimate Member

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    Perfect map, perfect background, perfect everything. I hope that map will be added ^^.
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  3. kaiurii

    kaiurii Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    the duck empire shall rise.
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  4. NTMNathan

    NTMNathan Famous Ultimate Member

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    Glad I tested this!!

    Loookin beautiful :)
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  5. frostbowblade

    frostbowblade Famous

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    I love this map! Your building themes and style is great. :D

    Hope I get to play this map soon!
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  6. ItsJustEnder

    ItsJustEnder Talk of the Town

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    yayayay
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  7. NicoNatsuhi

    NicoNatsuhi Talk of the Town

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    I hope it gets accepted, looks really beautiful c:
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  8. Dynu

    Dynu Talk of the Town

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    All I can say is this map is Deadly.. get it ? eh.. anyone? no.. okay
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  9. sleepv

    sleepv Famous Ultimate Member

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    HEHE
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  10. DankMemeHannah

    DankMemeHannah Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    JustKiwi you are honestly like my favourite map maker! I think this map is beautiful! The colours are spectacular and the course is awesome! The traps look fun and challenging, which is the perfect combination for traps! I hope to play this map soon!! (◕‿◕)♡
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  11. Magiiiix

    Magiiiix Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    This map is beautiful! I love the colour scheme and theme of this map, a lovely addition to DeathRun! :D
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  12. DrinkACoke

    DrinkACoke Talk of the Town Emerald Member

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    Awesome Map! :D
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  13. TeaAddict

    TeaAddict Honey Maker

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    OHMYGOD THATS MY KIWI, ILYSM GIRLY, YOU'RE AMAZING AND I WILL SUPPORT YOU IN WHATEVER YOU WANT! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU ACKK <3333
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  14. LichtClark

    LichtClark Honey Maker

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    H0t map!,
    You have hit the subject particularly as everything is very colorful and detailed.
    All rules were observed for the construction.
    You notice how this was done in detail and was built with much love.
    Also, the difficulty met great for both player skill groups so that it balances.
    The world comes with many ideas that I have not seen and it is well suited for long games.
    Overall everything is perfect for a release!
    GL!
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  15. Spintown

    Spintown The Bees Knees

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    I like how most posted maps get almost completely positive comments until I come around. So lets do this...

    Good:
    - You have an original trap idea, so that's great. Shuffle parkour could be an interesting trap.
    - I like the invisible path layout. Not too easy or too hard.
    - I think the ending could be a lot of fun. Assuming there's not barriers blocking you, there's some options for creative strafing through the end portal there.
    - You used a couple traps in new ways. The piston trap use is pretty cool.
    - I didn't see anyplace you can completely avoid traps or any of those STUPID ladders that Team Nectar added to a lot of the old maps.

    Bad:
    - The water fall trap is ugly, and I'm not 100% sure how you want it to work. Is it like the water walls on Starbase?
    - You overused 2 different trap types. You have 4 different air snakes & 4 different disappearing block traps. I'd like to see a few more creative or at least different traps used instead.
    - You have a emerald jump boost that sends you up a level, but there's absolutely no point to it that I can see. You can't die, it's not a jump that uses any skill, and it's just 1 more place people could end up rubberbanding on.

    Conclusion:
    This map is close to getting a thumbs up from me, but needs a little more work. The standard is pretty high atm since we're not getting new maps as often with this new update strategy The Hive is using.

    Secondary conclusion...people in this forum don't know how to give constructive feedback.
    Last edited: Sep 12, 2018
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  16. JustKiwi

    JustKiwi Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    Thank you for the constructive feedback, I'll go through my opinions on the bad.

    -Yes the Water Wall trap is like the ones on Starbase.
    -Each of the overused trap types I tried to use in different ways, like making the way they're used differently than normal.
    -You can die on that single jump boost, you may not notice but theres a "Falling Leaves" trap like the falling blocks traps but it also hit the jump pad.

    Anyway thank you for your opinion!
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  17. JustKiwi

    JustKiwi Talk of the Town Ultimate Member

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    Just a liitle bump heh
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  18. NTMNathan

    NTMNathan Famous Ultimate Member

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    Again, Im so glad with this build c:
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